Tuesday 15 September 2015

Dog on the beach story

1-The salty breeze reeks.
2-I fell over and the disgusting sand jumps into mouth.
3-the salt water waves make me splutter.
4-The sharp stone in the sand dig into my feet.
5-The cold breeze sails past me 

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