Friday 31 March 2017

Literacy reflection T1 W9

For literacy this week we carried on with our camp reflection. I haven't quite finished it yet. 

This is what it looks like so far. 

1 comment:

  1. Hi Franklin you have made a good start on your camp reflection. It is great to see you including more detail in your paragraphs. Next time you could go back and add specific details on Mitchell's gully as some people may not know what this place was. You could also include details such as the name of the walk we did. Don't forget to include your WALT in your blog posts.

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.