Hi Franklin, you hve used some excellent vocabulary in your ANZAC poem. You have shown the contrast between war and peace very strongly. What was your WALT for this activity? Next time you could work on your layout as this is a strong piece of writing yet it doesn't have as much impact on the reader when it still has the parts of speech (noun etc) labels. Mrs P
Hey Franklin, good work. It was definitely worth applying your thinking skills to this task. I think Mrs P is right, it would be great to edit your presentation and give it the make-over it deserves!
Hi Frank, you hve used some excellent vocabulary in your ANZAC poem. You have shown the contrast between war and peace very strongly. What was your WALT for this activity? Next time you could work on your layout as this is a strong piece of writing yet it doesn't have as much impact on the reader when it still has the parts of speech (noun etc) labels. From your mate Steele.
Kia Ora Franklin. Great work on your Anzac diamante poem it is awesome and it has cool facts about war at the top and peace at the bottom. At the end you are meant to take out all the spaces and subjects and then add a picture. what part did you enjoy mostly about Anzac?
Hi Franklin, you hve used some excellent vocabulary in your ANZAC poem. You have shown the contrast between war and peace very strongly. What was your WALT for this activity? Next time you could work on your layout as this is a strong piece of writing yet it doesn't have as much impact on the reader when it still has the parts of speech (noun etc) labels. Mrs P
ReplyDeleteHey Franklin, good work. It was definitely worth applying your thinking skills to this task. I think Mrs P is right, it would be great to edit your presentation and give it the make-over it deserves!
ReplyDeleteHi Frank, you hve used some excellent vocabulary in your ANZAC poem. You have shown the contrast between war and peace very strongly. What was your WALT for this activity? Next time you could work on your layout as this is a strong piece of writing yet it doesn't have as much impact on the reader when it still has the parts of speech (noun etc) labels. From your mate Steele.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Franklin. Great work on your Anzac diamante poem it is awesome and it has cool facts about war at the top and peace at the bottom. At the end you are meant to take out all the spaces and subjects and then add a picture. what part did you enjoy mostly about Anzac?
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