Friday 23 June 2017

Literacy reflection week 8 term 2

W.A.L.T - Describe a Family member. 
This week for literacy we did a family description.  I chose my granny because she is really important to me. 

3 comments:

  1. Kai Ora Franklin its Kaleb here.

    Great work this is a great description about your Granny. Why did you choose to describe your Granny???

    This reminds me of when I did a description on Miss Reissmann and also I did another description on my little cousin Ben. If you want to see that got to my blog.

    This is great Franklin it is good because you used great personal voice. Maybe next time you could tell us what you favorite memory with your Granny is.

    Good work F-Dog great blog post. Kai Pai. From Kaleb.

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  2. Hi franklin, Blake here from StPatricks school, I really like how you explained who your granny is and her character, it was very interesting.

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