Friday, 30 June 2017

literacy week 9 reflection

This week we started to make our speech. We have not finished it yet. 


  1. Kia Ora Franklin its Kaleb here. This is a great speech.

    This reminds of when I did my speech on rugby. Why was this your topic? I think that you speech was quite good. Is rugby you favourite sport???

    Maybe next time you could write a little bit about your speech instead of just what you did.

    Anyway it was very good and that English player at the end was not attractive at all. Kai Pai, From Kaleb

  2. Kia Ora Franklin. Great work on your speech next time you could add a bit more about penalty and card. you presented your speech really well. The thing is I don't think that the last slide is true it is funny though. Goodbye. Alex.


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