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Kia Ora Franklin, My name is Julia and I am a year 8 student at Yaldhurst Model School.I think that this post is good because you have explained what it is about and why you did this.I like that you have added a photo, it gives this an extra pop! It is cool because I am doing this exact thing in class as well.Maybe next time you could put in what you learnt to give the reader more information. Apart from that, awesome blog post!Kind RegardsJuliaYaldhurst Model School
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Kia Ora Franklin, My name is Julia and I am a year 8 student at Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI think that this post is good because you have explained what it is about and why you did this.
I like that you have added a photo, it gives this an extra pop! It is cool because I am doing this exact thing in class as well.
Maybe next time you could put in what you learnt to give the reader more information. Apart from that, awesome blog post!
Kind Regards
Julia
Yaldhurst Model School